Wind

spring time storms present with force.. cleaning the air strong easterly wind whips tender spring green leaves.. birds silent oak's leaves turned backwards... the chihuahua barks pines sway with the gusts all weak and dead needles fall... a dove coos solid gray skies weighted with moisture the gulf falls on Georgia
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Shiells Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 1:45 PM
Hi Sara, This was a beauty~ Wonderfully expressed. Thank you very much for sharing this write with us. Peace, Deborah
Deschler Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 5:44 PM
Almost everyone in the United States has been experiencing stormy weather this past week. You described it so perfectly in this poem. Well done, Sara! I really enjoyed it!
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 7:18 PM
wow, I LOVE that last one. I think for haiku effect, that middle one about the leaves and the chihuahua is the sterling one!!
Kendrick Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 6:29 AM
Thanks for the visit to my page. I knew that you would get a chuckle out of Princess barking at the wind. Sara
Gorelick Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Like all of them, but especially the oak tree one. BG
Kendrick Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 6:28 AM
I bet you got a chuckle at the chihuahua barking at the wind.. Sara
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