Wind

spring time storms present with force.. cleaning the air strong easterly wind whips tender spring green leaves.. birds silent oak's leaves turned backwards... the chihuahua barks pines sway with the gusts all weak and dead needles fall... a dove coos solid gray skies weighted with moisture the gulf falls on Georgia

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Date: 5/3/2014 1:45:00 PM
Hi Sara, This was a beauty~ Wonderfully expressed. Thank you very much for sharing this write with us. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/2/2014 5:44:00 PM
Almost everyone in the United States has been experiencing stormy weather this past week. You described it so perfectly in this poem. Well done, Sara! I really enjoyed it!
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Date: 4/30/2014 7:18:00 PM
wow, I LOVE that last one. I think for haiku effect, that middle one about the leaves and the chihuahua is the sterling one!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2014 6:29:00 AM
Thanks for the visit to my page. I knew that you would get a chuckle out of Princess barking at the wind. Sara
Date: 4/30/2014 7:46:00 AM
Like all of them, but especially the oak tree one. BG
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2014 6:28:00 AM
I bet you got a chuckle at the chihuahua barking at the wind.. Sara
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