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Wind

Wind

wandered

whispering

when wondrously. . .

Whoosh!


“Wail,”

went wind

while whirling

with wild whipping

whines.


March 11, 2019 for Joseph May's Light Up The Page 2 Poetry Contest

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 3/19/2019 11:44:00 AM ...and the sponsor as blown away by this one as i was, back with congratulations! xomo Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 3/18/2019 4:13:00 PM This is an excellent double Lanterne, Andrea. Sound and movement take center stage! Congrats on placing first. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 3/18/2019 12:12:00 PM Awesome, Andrea. Congratulations on your 1st place win :) Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/17/2019 8:39:00 AM A perfect winner, Andrea, congratulations:) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2019 8:33:00 AM - Congratulations on your top winning poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/17/2019 2:31:00 AM This belongs at the top Andrea! Congratulations on your deserving first placement. This clever lanterne is going into my faves! Happy St. Patrick's Day my friend. I'm dealing with a cold right now. Hugs, Connie xxoo Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 3/17/2019 12:25:00 AM Hi Andrea, I'm not suprised to see you in the top spot! Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Andrew Fairchild Date: 3/16/2019 6:13:00 PM OO. AWESOME! I just get swept up by the wind in your poem and blown away! (Pun intended.) Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 3/16/2019 4:49:00 PM I love a whispering wind...Congrats on your win Andrea.. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 3/16/2019 1:08:00 AM WoW! Andrea, Great use of words that begin with " W". Good imagery and content. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 3/15/2019 4:43:00 PM lol, wonderful use of the form its active and rather funny, too, enjoyed reading it, Andrea Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 3/13/2019 11:49:00 AM Andrea, this is great, sure Joseph will love it ~ Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 3/12/2019 10:03:00 AM Wonderfully-written double Lanterne, Andrea! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Agnes Krampe Date: 3/12/2019 6:49:00 AM I like the onomatopoeia in this poem! Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/12/2019 6:01:00 AM Hip hip hooray! Good luck in the contest. A fun read. Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/12/2019 3:22:00 AM Excellent, only you could have done it with W, Andrea:) Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 3/12/2019 1:26:00 AM This is goooooooodddddddddd...... Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/11/2019 4:54:00 PM WOW, love it, so clever. Login to Reply

James Horn Date: 3/11/2019 4:42:00 PM While walloping waking whale withstood whipping winning warship which we were washing Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 3/11/2019 4:33:00 PM Witty wonderful word wave! I wuv it! ;D sWeet! Good luck in the contest! xomo Login to Reply

James Horn Date: 3/11/2019 4:30:00 PM Have to write poems about food for a Food Poetry Recital in Shallotte, NC at Roark Library end of month of March. Slicing Enticing Cake Had started out when we were slicing, Incredible cake seeming so enticing; When found, Perfectly round, With excellent icing and sweet spicing. James Thesarious Hilarious Horn Retired Veteran RiverSea Plantation Bolivia, NC Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/11/2019 4:21:00 PM A very active wind...lovely! Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 3/11/2019 4:01:00 PM Bravo, Andrea. Superbly done. Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/11/2019 4:49:00 PM Actually, it was done wrong, LIne . I focused so much on all words being w that i forgot correct syllable count. Good thing I rememberd to redo it now.