Wince

Eyelashes flutter
to grip the grime
from particulates
radical in flight
with the loose
trajectory of
pillaging
rogues.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mckenzie Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 5:31 PM
John~ Very cleverly done! I like it a lot. Laura :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 3:43 PM
Interesting write. Could go several ways with it. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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