Wilted Flowers

The flowers wilted
no sunshine on the meadow
no light hit the ground
barely raindrops on the plain
not able to revive them.

Copyright McCuen 2008
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Winter Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 9:28 AM
This is so sad. Sometimes what seems hopeless often is not. Thank you so much for all your lovely comments. Warmest wishes for a beautiful new year. Love, Shar
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 4:58 AM
A little rain makes things grow, even in our lives. God Bless. Vince
Mckenzie Avatar
December 30, 2008 at 2:51 PM
Though provoking write with so few words. Wonderfylly done! Laura :)
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