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Wilted Dreams

With its' damaged stem, 
Atop its' fallen petals, 
The sad flower weeps.

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Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 9:52 AM

The sad flower weeps, nice line, it falls with the title.

Daniel Neal

March 27, 2009 at 3:10 AM

The death of a flower is felt in this write. DN

Chris Goombi

March 25, 2009 at 2:03 AM

The part of life we hate to see, death.

Elizabeth Neal

March 24, 2009 at 7:43 PM

Sad haiku, poor flower. I hope you gave it some water. Love E.

Tyler Martin

March 23, 2009 at 10:59 PM

Amazing work, you bust out these haikus like I breathe air. Tyler

Brian Strand

March 18, 2009 at 6:23 AM

Beautiful observation Raul.Rgds Brian

Danielle Moreno

March 16, 2009 at 8:12 PM

VERY NICE WRITING RAUL THAT WAS A GREAT AND GOOD POEM............................................................DANIELLE

Carolyn Devonshire

March 16, 2009 at 1:29 PM

The title drew my interest, Raul, and the poem surely delivers. Flowers, like people, weep when damaged. Poignant!

Robin L. Gass

March 16, 2009 at 1:11 PM

Excellent imagery in this sad but beautiful Haiku, Raul. Your Haikus are wonderful! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

March 16, 2009 at 12:47 PM

It sadly happens. Nature, life can be so cruel. Love, Shar

March 16, 2009 at 12:15 PM

Nice use of personification in this poem. Wonderful title that compliments the piece. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen