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Willows Trees and Peacocks

pendant green leaves weep
branches bend toward the ground-
peacocks prance and preen

peahens understand
bright blue-feathers fan out-
winds whisper secrets

grey frog croaks loudly 
willow canopy is home-
cottage red door opens

Copyright © Connie Gildersleeve | Year Posted 2013

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Skat A Date: 5/26/2015 4:55:00 PM wonderful haiku Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 7/6/2013 6:10:00 PM nice haiku Connie...best wishes Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 7/7/2013 7:16:00 AM Joseph thank your for your visit and comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 3/24/2013 8:35:00 AM I love willows and peacocks, so I had to read this one, you capture them so well. very lovely Connie. Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/24/2013 8:42:00 AM Sheri thank you for your lovely comment. I haven't written many Haiku poems and I believe I starting to understand its form. Warm Smiles, Connie

Painted Hunter Date: 2/26/2013 6:42:00 AM this is just silky...I really enjoyed reading it Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/26/2013 1:28:00 PM Thank you Caleb for your wonderful comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/22/2013 6:39:00 PM I remember really liking this one from before. Nice seeing it again here. congrats on the winners list. Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/23/2013 12:43:00 PM Thanks Andrea for your lovely comment. Much appreciated, Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/22/2013 1:38:00 AM Hi congratulations Connie, great haiku, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/22/2013 6:49:00 AM Thanks Mandy for stopping by and for the congrats. Sometimes it's hard to congrats all the winers, especially if the judged contests come in all at once. Take care. Warm Smiles, Connie

Seren Roberts Date: 2/21/2013 7:07:00 PM I am so impressed Conne, well done ...Seren Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/22/2013 6:50:00 AM Thanks Seren for your lovely comment. connie

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/21/2013 6:13:00 PM Connie,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/22/2013 6:51:00 AM Thanks Linda for your lovely comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Debbie Duncan Date: 2/20/2013 12:21:00 PM I love the haiku ;} have a great day Connie ;} Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/20/2013 1:28:00 PM Thanks Debbie. Your commend is much appreciated. I love writing this style but never to sure if the for is correct. Thanks for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey Date: 2/17/2013 8:38:00 PM Yes, this is an excellent write my friend, I truly loved reading this fantastic poem this evening! You have painted a masterful write with this harmonious Haiku! What a stupendous piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/18/2013 7:39:00 AM Thank you Russell for you delightful comment. Much appreciated my friend. Warm Smiles Always, Connie

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/17/2013 4:25:00 PM ooh, what a great line: becoming feral. It sounds like your hair is so alive!! Clever haiku, Connie. Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/18/2013 7:41:00 AM Andrea thanks you for you delightful comment. Much appreciated. I'm a wild child, hair long with hair long and feral, lol. Warm Smiles, Connie