Willow

By the glist’ning lake, a fair Willow once stood
On a lush bed of grass under a sapphire sky.
There her graceful arms danced in the wind
And gleamed like stars in their brightest hours.
’Twas there where her soft song seeped through the hills.
How the birds would fall quiet, and the streams stand still!
All nature would listen to her sweeping tune.

So fair she was, but as the years passed by,
The Willow’s beauty vanished,
Her beaming smile faded
And the sparkle in her eyes died.
Her heart grew heavy, her arms sunk lower.
No longer could she gaze into the glass of the lake;
No longer could she sing, only weep and weep.

How cruel time is! 
How He stole her youth, burdened her with age;
Mocked her flaws, and wrinkled her face!
Abandoned by the birds, she grieved alone.
Only Death took pity on the poor Willow.
Now silence fills the desolate wood,
For all that remains is a stump where she stood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Salehi Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 1:20 PM
Can you believe it, I read this today! BEAUTIFUL. Time is the enemy that hides within.....
Rose Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 1:13 AM
Thank you so much!
Johnson Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Congrats on your winning placement. Not all parting gifts are happy ones. Good work and a reminder that "Time" must be respected and valued.
Rose Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 5:47 PM
thank you!
Cheema Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Congrats Jasmine on your finest position and beautiful poem! Balveen
Rose Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 3:11 PM
thank you!
Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 4:16 PM
So wonderful to share the winners’ list with your great poetry..Congrats on awesome work..Sara
Rose Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 5:21 PM
thank you Sara!
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September 2, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Wonderful write...awesome perspective...Congrats :) Sunita
Rose Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 5:21 PM
Thank you Sunita!
Kimathi Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Congrats Jasmine, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
Rose Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 8:07 AM
thank you!!
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