Willow

Branches of the willow hide us from the world as you caress me tenderly in your arms
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Pathak Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 11:54 PM
Lovely romance-filled Cinquain and a worthy winner
Merryman Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 7:04 PM
A sweet, romantic cinquain! Congrats on your win, Andrea! Blessings, Kim M
Lawless Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 6:23 PM
Andrea, you make the willow weep in blushing....
Alex Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 1:11 AM
Beautiful Cinquain. Congratulatios!
Callus Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 9:34 AM
A lovely, romantic image, Andrea...and a worthy top winner, too! Congratulations. Regards // paul
Somadas Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 11:11 PM
Lovely poem.. Congrats on your great win Andrea...
Roper Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 3:59 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea, perfect poem with fantastic flow. Hugs Eve
Canerdy Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 8:36 AM
Delightful cinquain, Andrea! Janice
Devonshire Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 2:52 PM
You crated a beautiful image, Andrea. It would be nice to be wrapped in the arms of a comforting willow. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn (You sure have been busy here lately. Hope your internet is back on at home.)
Faulkner Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 1:38 PM
I also prefer the traditional, love the image of circular branches holding the lovers...
Krutsinger Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 4:41 PM
Thoroughly delightful cinquain Andrea. Good luck in the contest!
Horne Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 2:07 PM
oh, this is lovely
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 7:32 AM
A romantic spot you found--lovely poem, Andrea.
Cunningham Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 2:06 AM
Nice image, well written Andrea. Tom
Adams Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 7:11 PM
willow trees always make for beautiful poetry... adore this one... hugs
Watt Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 5:28 PM
Tender, furtive, romantic, dreamy. Very nice.
Bauer Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 4:15 PM
beautiful! best of luck in the contest, andrea...
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