Willoughby Is Not a Stop On This Line

Gart Williams has an occupation in New York City.
He works for a very prominent advertising agency.
However, things have not gone well recently.
His boss is one who is not known for patience.
At a meeting, Mr. Mizrow voiced his loquacious vehemence.
It seems relations with the boss went south
when Gart said to him: “Fat boy, why don’t you shut your mouth?”
It could have easily been the end of his career.
Luckily, Mr. Mizrow wished for him to stay around here.

Gart, how did you get into a rut such as this?
He keeps reminding you of a “push, push, push business”.
Perhaps advertising was not the right scenario for you.
A change to a slower and idyllic lifestyle is overdue.
On the commuter train home, in a dream you would see
such a town of your wishes known as “Willoughby”.
You described your dream in detail to wife Jane.
She thought you were lackadaisical and possibly insane.

Well Gart, there is no such stop as Willoughby along the line.
If you attempt of get off there, things will not be too fine.
Sometimes, we would all like to visit a place called Willoughby.
However, you must keep your feet planted in reality.

Based on the Twilight Zone episode "A Stop At Willoughby".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/27/2011 3:24:00 PM
I love this one. Absolutely love it. You are incredible at writing this 'dialogue' type poetry. Love, Deb
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Date: 1/27/2011 1:43:00 PM
very nice, thank you for your comment on my poem Intoxication. Pie eyed? i've not heard that one in a long time. Have a good day
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Date: 1/27/2011 12:11:00 PM
Very nice character sketch of Gart, Robert
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