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Will You Still Look Cute

Will you still look cute in your coffin? will that even matter after all, will your garden still be green when you head the clarion call. O, will teardrops trail your departure, is there going to be a value- void? will many heart still hold your picture, how many will plunge into paranoid? Would a duplex be build in that depth where you will lie lame in serenity? What beauty do you nurse with your breath, love, legacies, lassitude, lewdness or laxity?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/17/2012 10:51:00 AM
many questions here, Adeleke, excellent poem, wonderful realistic theme.
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Date: 8/17/2012 8:03:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading so many diverse poems this morning Adeleke. I am very happy to have been able to read yours. Thank you for sharing your well written poetry. Have a very beautiful and joyful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2012 3:26:00 AM
Very nice... death faces us all... but do we really know what that means... Terry
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