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Will You Meet Me?

If only it were a place that I could get to… This place sacred and safe, free of scorn and hate Distant is the sound of suffering Galaxies of energy bursting like balloons Beyond Saturn’s colorful rings Darkness is nonexistent and sadness never enters Astral phenomena majestically empowering all of those who enter Do I dare to name this place? Shall I not speak of it as it may not exist? This place where everyone is the same Souls are free and spirits abound If I were to find my way there Would you find me? Will you wait for me as God waits for his children? Patiently? This place of light though the sun need not shine If I find my way there will you meet me? Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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Dean Masciarelli

Date: 5/18/2009 4:59:00 AM

Hi Lena, all of your loved ones will be waiting for you when it is your turn to cross through time and space. So that you may become one with each other.Because there is a special place waiting for you, and each and every one of us when it is our time to cross.

David Smalling

Date: 4/8/2009 10:53:00 AM

My dearest, what an edenic moment to anticipate ... what sweet ideas you put on my brain. I love it.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/26/2009 4:53:00 AM

Dear Lolita, I will meet YOU there for"this place" does exist "This place where everyone is the same" Everyone becomes ONE and the Light of GOD shines brighter Beautiful imagery great flow A POEM from YOUR Heart Superb Write ALWAYS...HG

Jane Bowen

Date: 3/21/2009 11:07:00 AM

Bravo darling! I loved Saturn's colorful rings and how that blended so well at that stanza...Life is what it is...and low and behold I think that the place you spoke of....is right here...the soupie...But sadness is sadness, I don't know how life would be without loss and sadness to make us the strong characters we are....I understand your strong point though! Know your place does exist. I LOVED THIS WRITE...just genuine and full of imagery! Thanks for your welcomed comments too btw~Jane:)

Alan Fitz

Date: 3/21/2009 10:44:00 AM

This place you seek, im sure you will find, True love will follow, it is a matter of time. When you get there, may i share your in sight? For this place you seek, sounds o so right. Great write, keep up the good work Lena.

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 3/20/2009 4:16:00 PM

i will meet you.......there! tnx 4ur comments on my featured poem-after school.

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 3/20/2009 4:06:00 PM

tnx for ur comment on my featured poem-after school........ofcourse yes, i will meet you there where roses bloom and the trees sigh and the world is in a whisper lost.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/19/2009 4:53:00 PM

Your faith is an inspiration, Lolita. This is a very compelling poem, filled with provocative images that lure the reader to the "unnamed" place. Simply heavenly!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/19/2009 1:39:00 PM

Some day, Lolita. Some day. Just gotta keep believing. Vince

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/19/2009 5:40:00 AM

Yes. Beautiful, hopeful poetry of longing from deep within your heart and soul. Love, Shar

Arany P.

Date: 3/19/2009 3:58:00 AM

your words surely has given a wonderful world!~ Arany

Diane Christian

Date: 3/19/2009 3:38:00 AM

this is a beautiful poem, i'm sure we will be there in that place, where everyone is the same, no sickness, no death no pain or suffering, a beautiful place to be. thanks for your feed back on my poem Sing and thanks for thinking of my son james, he still isn't in any pain, God is so good, God bless you From diane

Cynthia Ondrich

Date: 3/18/2009 10:09:00 PM

Lolita, that was awesome and inspiring - the words, the picture you created, and the message behind the words. Heavenly. Cynthia.

John Rhinem

Date: 3/18/2009 8:52:00 PM

Smile~I believe that I myself most surely would dear lady!!!:):) Again, "Beautiful Lena Townsend," Your creativity abounds within this wonderfully beautiful write of Yours here!!!:):) Smile~I am most surely and certainly becoming a fan of "Yours!!!":):) I just love the way that You write~A reflection of this extremely amazing lady; to say the very least!!!:):)~"Sweet Dreams Precious Lady, Love John!!!":):)

Robin Maughan

Date: 3/18/2009 6:51:00 PM

Very moving..I will be there!! It is a well lit eternity that awits us!! I really felt this!! Love your work.. Hugs, Robin

John Loving Iii

Date: 3/18/2009 5:16:00 PM

in fact i am schedualed to be in that very place in the near future if the world continues on it's current path. let's say around December 2012 maybe sooner. let's meet. john

Steve Voorhees

Date: 3/18/2009 5:13:00 PM

You painted such a beautiful place...If it exists then I am there!! Nice write Miss Lolita!! Much love, Steve