Will You Marry Me

I asked for your love
Your answer turned into a spear
and pierced my heart
and wounded my heart
Paralysed now are my emotions 
which once wandered freely 
with my dreams
to enter your territory with love songs
your "no" to my plea was okay with me
It was a firm foundation 
on which to build my hope 
So soul-sickening 
you said further 
"I can never love you"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 6:15 AM
- Sarpong, congrats with your winning poem - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kumankoma  Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 5:51 AM
Thanks Anne Lise
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 6:04 AM
Dropping back to congratulate you on the win, Sarpong
Kumankoma  Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 5:52 AM
Thanks Dr Mehta
Konos Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:23 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
Kumankoma  Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 5:56 AM
Thanks for your contest too.
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:45 AM
oh a rejected proposal - so sad and a unique take on the theme - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Kumankoma  Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 5:57 AM
Thanks Jan :)
Mehta Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 9:01 AM
Nice take of on the theme of love that hurts or is lost, Sarpong
Kumankoma  Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 4:29 AM
Thanks Dr Mehta... :) your inspire me a lot. I'm always grateful
Kumankoma  Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 4:29 AM
Thanks Dr Mehta... :) you inspire me a lot. I'm always grateful
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