Will You Ever Know

Will you ever know I write for you....
When I couldn't laugh or cry and I was blue..
You taught me steps to a song I couldn't hear..
We drew pictures from places with no fear.
So many pages that were torn and sent away...
Will you ever know these words I say...
Like so many stars I couldn't trace...
Endless thoughts in clear black lace....
Waves of trust that sink in the sand..
Dreams of sorrow in my empty hand..
On a tablet of stone my words grew...
Will you ever know I write for you...



by Michael J Falotico
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 7:57 PM
Such sensitivity portrayed in your verse. The line "dreams of sorrow in my empty hand" really touched my heart. You penned this beautifully.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 7:07 PM
thankxx so very much Michael for reading all my recent poetry for the contests.. so happy u like my style as I am always anticipating reading yours luv... chemical combustion of words explode as we share... enjoying the apple and kiss having to share with puppy .. haha... your Jersey Girl in thinking mode ..always and forever your poetry prisoner ..
Minardi Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 9:24 AM
Awww... I like the devotion inside this poem. A writing to die for, Michael.
Clark Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 9:21 PM
Hi I enjoyed reading this. Very well written
Horne Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 2:59 PM
Lovely write, my friend. Thanks - your contest was a lot of fun : )
Dominick Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 12:53 PM
Excellent poem Michael! Doesn't matter that your muse is aware of your beautiful words, you know... - Best, Karen
Susan Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 11:19 AM
so beautiful and romantic! a great flow too. i wish someone would write something like this for me. who is the lucky woman?
Sweetheart Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 9:58 AM
a magnificent treasure my W.K. of PS.. tender words from your romantic heart luv.. your J.G. is ingesting these lines forever to remain in my mind... with luv always .. forever..
Sweetheart Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 9:58 AM
a magnificent treasure my W.K. of PS.. tender words from your romantic heart luv.. your J.G. is ingesting these lines forever to remain in my mind... with luv always .. forever..
Brown Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 8:26 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry I have enjoyed reading it today Michael. Wishing you a wonderful weekend and hoping you find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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