Will You Be Mine Please
... this poem needs a little something...
That's way more to me then nothing
it needs empathy from you to me
because you need to see
everything i go through
just to see you
but i would do so much more
to make you come through that door
and say yes
and worry me less
because i'm crazy for you baby
and maybe,just maybe
you mite feel that way to
and the put yourself in my shoes
just so that you can see
how much it would mean to me
if you said yes
and cut out all this mess
so i want you to answer honestly to me
could you actually see
how much i want to be with you
so don't deny me and make me boo
just say yes
and then ill bless
all the things that made you say it
and maybe for just a bit
we can just sit under the stars
hand in hand looking for mars
and all those stars would shine
so.... will you be mine?
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