Will You

Will you wrap me in your arms 
and hold me oh so tight
Will you take away my hurt 
and fight to make things right
Will you be a steadfast anchor 
that holds me lest I flee
or will you also turn away 
and simply set me free...

mkt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/28/2017 1:57:00 PM
Hello. Michael It sounds like you ae hurting. Sometimes love hurts. But it is not suppose to not real love. Nice to meet you.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/20/2017 8:48:00 AM
Micheal so you know,I am getting over a hurt as well.
Date: 2/28/2017 1:52:00 PM
Michael, I like your rhyme.Will she take away your hurt? Hurt takes awhile to heal. I love this rhyme. Nice to meet you.
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Michael Thompson
Date: 3/20/2017 6:37:00 AM
Thank you Darlene for your kind words. Some hurts take longer than others. Very nice to meet you here also.
Date: 2/28/2017 10:30:00 AM
Short and bittersweet ;)
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Michael Thompson
Date: 3/20/2017 6:35:00 AM
Thank you Maureen. Sorry for the delay in responding.
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