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Will You

Will you wrap me in your arms and hold me oh so tight Will you take away my hurt and fight to make things right Will you be a steadfast anchor that holds me lest I flee or will you also turn away and simply set me free... mkt

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Date: 2/28/2017 1:57:00 PM
Hello. Michael It sounds like you ae hurting. Sometimes love hurts. But it is not suppose to not real love. Nice to meet you.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/20/2017 8:48:00 AM
Micheal so you know,I am getting over a hurt as well.
Date: 2/28/2017 1:52:00 PM
Michael, I like your rhyme.Will she take away your hurt? Hurt takes awhile to heal. I love this rhyme. Nice to meet you.
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Michael Thompson
Date: 3/20/2017 6:37:00 AM
Thank you Darlene for your kind words. Some hurts take longer than others. Very nice to meet you here also.
Date: 2/28/2017 10:30:00 AM
Short and bittersweet ;)
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Michael Thompson
Date: 3/20/2017 6:35:00 AM
Thank you Maureen. Sorry for the delay in responding.