Will You

WILL YOU?
He takes me on vacation to a resort 
just off the coast of Aruba. The hotel 
room is amazing...everything in it is 
white red and pink. From the 
couches, rugs and comforter on the 
bed... Im in aw as we walk through 
the door. No one has ever cared or 
loved me enough to do this 
before..it's raining outside which 
makes it even better for me. 
Something about the rain that's just 
enlightening..i open up the patio 
door so that i can hear the rain more 
clearly...he tells me to sit down and 
relax we've had a long flight, while he 
orders room service..I'm going to 
take a bath..he already knows what i 
like...i walk in the bathroom...my 
bath water has already been 
ran...with candles lit and rose pedals 
adorning each spot that my eyes 
land...my heart melts...wow..he 
comes in behind me and opens the 
window so there's a nice cool breeze 
flowing in...he asks if i want him to 
join me...i tell him of course i do 
baby feel free...we enjoy one 
another's company...how it's so 
relaxing...i can't get over how good 
this man is to me...all my guards are 
let down...he bathes me from head 
to toe...as i embrace the moment...i 
wash him clean...he steps out grabs 
a huge towel and wraps it around my 
small frame...he carries me to the 
bedroom...that's fully decorated with 
all of my favorite things..from candle 
scent to my favorite Vicky apparel 
and footie socks all in my favorite 
color ..i look him in his eyes and tell 
him i Love him...your something 
else...i changed into my lingerie he 
picked out for me..he has great 
taste...i ask him if he can hold me 
while i enjoy that instant...he 
obliges..but says but 1st he needs to 
know one thing...i look at him and 
asks and what's that? He pulls out a 
5 carat ring!!...i gasp for air...i can't 
breath..this is the moment i dreamt 
about so many times...he looks me 
in my eyes while getting down on 
one knee...he says he's been 
searching for me all his life...he 
never thought he'd find someone to 
complete the missing pieces in his 
life...his life would mean nothing 
without me and my girls in It...he 
says would i give him the honor of 
being his queen forever and become 
his wife...my tears are flowing 
endlessly..i cannot believe this is 
actually happening to me...I've 
always felt so unworthy and so 
unwanted...this man is amazing, God 
fearing, handsome, sexy, strong, 
gives unselfishly and has waves for 
days(lol). He has every attribute I've 
prayed for, from his head to his 
shoes... I'd be crazy not to say i 
do!!!!!!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/29/2013 2:53:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful poem, I love this poem. Nicely done poet. can you look at my poem please tell me what you think thanks
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Date: 1/28/2013 12:57:00 PM
Indeed you would, what a beautiful romantic write, love Elizabeth
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