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Will She Back Home

I stand by the shore The golden sunshine spy on me Nothing I store Except My love, Lukshmi I declared to the world This little word “LOVE” I doubt if anyone, young or old Knows how in us it grows Still my feet carrying me on that shore Gazing at the sands, outdoor Wondering how they are united Thousands and thousands As a family nearsighted The sea was wordless and sad No waves-sound I told him in a friendly way “If waves part you, one day will back” Some feelings invaded my inner part And my self I asked: “How it could be, if his loving waves loved another see” I turned my back And all stories took my heart To see how lovely our times passed Just like a worm Becoming a butterfly So beautiful! But! By her wings all stories ended And things fall apart Will she back home? Or I shall say On this very day Farewell, My Love!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/9/2014 7:21:00 AM
deeply expressed, Nasser Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Nasser Alabdali
Date: 1/11/2014 2:07:00 AM
Hi SKAT! your words touched my heart >>and to you I tipped my hat>>your smiling face told me>>how life is good to be... thank you for your warm welcoming words and for sure it's my honor to be your "FRIEND". Keep in touch, and stay well!! Hugs* Nasser
Date: 1/8/2014 3:54:00 PM
Nasser,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Nasser Alabdali
Date: 1/9/2014 4:46:00 AM
Hi LINDA!! I felt your words coming out from a sweet heart..this must be true!! How pleased I am to be invited by a poet like you..it's - in fact - an honor to be a member of this one big happy family. Wish you "the sweetest of nights and the finest of days". Nasser :)
Date: 1/8/2014 3:19:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Nasser ! - A touching poem with much emotion. - Pleased to read your first poem. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Nasser Alabdali
Date: 1/9/2014 4:28:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise for your welcoming words, valuable comments and friendly guidelines. I tip my hat to you!! wish you joys that never end during the year 2014 -_-

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