Will My Wish Come True

Will my wish come true? ............ Ever since I met you, we lived like friends and our friendship was such cannot be broken We grew up with lots of affection among us and that's lead us falling in love Today you mean so much to me I need your love like bees need honey and like flowers need sun and rain. Even though we are living apart from each other my heart always keeps your memory lingering Never fear tomorrow what will happen to us but till today I live with your dreams. Day by day our lives goes on as usual with or without our future but our love brings us fairy tale everyday My days pass without you being near to me But you surrender in my arms while I dream No one love me so much as you do and you are unique in many ways You have accepted me as I am and fills your love forever Now all I have to ask myself, will my wish come true? Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ Ravi Sathasivam 2016
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Date: 3/31/2016 6:40:00 AM
Beautiful romantic write Ravi
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Date: 3/7/2016 2:27:00 PM
Dear Ravi Brave simply magical my friend, love the inspirational feeling, and imagery it left with me at the last lines just perfectly finished, loved it, cheri hope your wish comes true Ravi.
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Date: 2/22/2016 3:29:00 PM
a wonderful dream that I hope comes true for you, Ravi. Beautiful sentiments.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 3/1/2016 12:53:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated. Hugs Ravi
Date: 2/22/2016 12:58:00 PM
That's the story of true, undying love! What a beautiful, romantic write, my friend - just a delight to read! Thank you for sharing this gem! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 3/1/2016 12:53:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated. Hugs Ravi
Date: 2/22/2016 9:38:00 AM
Wonderful write Ravi...best wishes
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 3/1/2016 12:53:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated.
Date: 2/22/2016 8:28:00 AM
Ahhh!! Great love story from Sri Lanka..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/1/2016 12:54:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated. Hugs Ravi
Date: 2/22/2016 5:08:00 AM
- A pleasure to see you back, my friend Ravi - I hope all your dreams will come true - Enjoy this beautiful poem, always written with love - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 3/1/2016 12:55:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment Anne. Appreciated. Hugs and kissesxxxx. Love Ravi
Date: 2/22/2016 3:08:00 AM
Tender, romantic poem inspired by true love regardless the distance! Yes., your dream will clme true my friend, Ravi, as long as you don't give up! Beautiful write!
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Date: 3/1/2016 12:55:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated.
Date: 2/22/2016 1:53:00 AM
Good day, Ravi....pleased to see you posting again:) This is a lovely romantic poem; there appears to be much affection between the two of you. I hope that your special dream will find fruition! ~ Regards // paul
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 2/22/2016 2:05:00 AM
Thank you very much. I have returned back after long vacation. Take care.
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