Will It Last

Beautiful, 
beautiful, 
and beautiful
is she.                       
Skin so soft
and smooth 
that
her lips
are perfect
for me.
Love 
when
she places 
her head
on my chest.
My chin
caressing 
her
forehead 
as she lays
to rest.
Awaking 
and staring 
deeply
into ones eye.
Departing
falls to tears
and kissing 
as she 
waves goodbye.
Alone 
reminiscing 
to the moments
that just past;
Praying
that she's
the one for me
But, will it last?!


Pace, G
"An old piece"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Estoque Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 2:07 AM
I absolutely adore this poem! Very descriptive and relatable.
Wright Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 2:23 PM
That is the million dollar question!! Most of us are not millionaires lol but a few are blessed enough to be! Beautiful poem!! Really is...
Ink-U-Script Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 10:09 AM
Thank you dearly sweetheart!!
Sanderson Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 12:11 AM
Loved it any way!Carma"
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 12:34 AM
Thank you, simply an old piece!!
Chigwedere Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 10:09 AM
you know that is the issue with every relationship.there is always a maybe oh perhaps and kinder.eish
Swayne Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 9:50 PM
Excellent work, yet again. You created the moment - I could see and feel it all.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 3:59 AM
Thank you beautiful!!!
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