Paul Martinez Poet ABC

Will I

will I...see you again?
Now in a grave,and then a 
friend.
Broken dreams,a heart to 
tend.
Will I...know when the time 
comes.
Is it right or wrong?the 
feeling I get when I hear your 
song..
I'll never know..how fast or 
slow.
The time it takes,to finally go..
Suicide,that's a no.
Contemplated many 
times,and when I do that's 
when it shines.
Eyes open,but lights blind.
Will i....i will not.

For Ariel,and anyone feeling 
suicide is the only way out..its 
not.

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Sue-Ellen Newman August 13, 2013 at 10:11 AM No it is not the answer, live is so precious , each day is a blessing, no matter how hard our trials and tribulations get, we have an escape route, our Lord Jesus, dealing with our issues, makes us stronger gives us the courage and will to go on, great read and great message, blessings sueellen

Shanity Rain August 11, 2013 at 9:02 AM this is possibly a great song ..I like this.

Royal Ninja July 24, 2013 at 7:57 AM it's not no matter how tough things get we gotta keep trying Paul Martinez July 24, 2013 at 3:08 PM Indeed we do..ive contemplated and attempted but I think about what my friend went through.and I just know its not the way..its like she whispers to me sayin not to go there..

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2013 at 11:11 PM ps... you are right, suicide is the easy way out... say NO NO! Life is the key. and no one should allow these feelings to take over... if ever the case, you know some one like this... please talk to them, and show them writing helps... take care... always~ PD

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2013 at 11:09 PM Paul, I'm adding you on my favorite list.. I will keep a close eye on you in hopes you enjoy it here. I am happy to know my daughter got you to join the site.. continue to post, if you ever need a tour around here.. don't be shy in asking... take care... cause Unicorns Rule..LOL, i said that to be silly... always~ PD... Paul Martinez July 24, 2013 at 3:12 PM Well thank you,and I appreciate you reading this poem..take care as well

Laura Mckenzie July 23, 2013 at 8:24 PM I enjoyed your words! Laura Paul Martinez July 24, 2013 at 3:03 PM Thanks