Will I

will I...see you again? Now in a grave,and then a friend. Broken dreams,a heart to tend. Will I...know when the time comes. Is it right or wrong?the feeling I get when I hear your song.. I'll never know..how fast or slow. The time it takes,to finally go.. Suicide,that's a no. Contemplated many times,and when I do that's when it shines. Eyes open,but lights blind. Will i....i will not. For Ariel,and anyone feeling suicide is the only way out..its not.

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Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/13/2013 10:11:00 AM

No it is not the answer, live is so precious , each day is a blessing, no matter how hard our trials and tribulations get, we have an escape route, our Lord Jesus, dealing with our issues, makes us stronger gives us the courage and will to go on, great read and great message, blessings sueellen

Shanity Rain

Date: 8/11/2013 9:02:00 AM

this is possibly a great song ..I like this.

Royal Ninja

Date: 7/24/2013 7:57:00 AM

it's not no matter how tough things get we gotta keep trying

Paul Martinez
Date: 7/24/2013 3:08:00 PM

Indeed we do..ive contemplated and attempted but I think about what my friend went through.and I just know its not the way..its like she whispers to me sayin not to go there..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2013 11:11:00 PM

ps... you are right, suicide is the easy way out... say NO NO! Life is the key. and no one should allow these feelings to take over... if ever the case, you know some one like this... please talk to them, and show them writing helps... take care... always~ PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2013 11:09:00 PM

Paul, I'm adding you on my favorite list.. I will keep a close eye on you in hopes you enjoy it here. I am happy to know my daughter got you to join the site.. continue to post, if you ever need a tour around here.. don't be shy in asking... take care... cause Unicorns Rule..LOL, i said that to be silly... always~ PD...

Paul Martinez
Date: 7/24/2013 3:12:00 PM

Well thank you,and I appreciate you reading this poem..take care as well

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/23/2013 8:24:00 PM

I enjoyed your words! Laura

Paul Martinez
Date: 7/24/2013 3:03:00 PM

Thanks