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January 7, 2024

I sit with sullen memories, alone on an amber shore. A balmy breeze ruffles my hair as I recall a night of wildling winds that took you away, my love. It violently ripped us apart, plunging a dagger into my heart as if Romeo's hand impaled it there, leaving it bleeding in mistaken err. Once, we bore genuine feelings that youthful passion explores... dancing in moonlight's golden glow. But too soon you were gone, leaving me grieving and forlorn. Melancholy misery darkened the sky and brought tears to doleful eyes. Now, my weary mind turns back the night to when my world was turned upside down, ending in ashes and embers that took flight. I remember waking early one morning, as a child, singing a wishful song, "Daisy, Daisy, growing in the meadow, please tell me true. Will I fall in love?" Never given thought to the hellish heartbreak only death could cause, or the lingering need I still feel to hold you in my arms again. Memories take me to a dismal place filled with shadows that haunt my dreams. Only on waking can I catch my breath to stop my screams and tears of despair, the mawkish mourning over your death. I bare my heart's bitter bereavement with pangs of loss each time I recall our youthful days of passion when once we loved and had it all... before wildling winds took you away.

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Date: 1/20/2024 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner in this contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 1/20/2024 3:23:00 PM
Thanks, Sara. I appreciate your congrats.
Date: 1/10/2024 11:23:00 AM
I see a lot of emotions in this poem and nice light alliteration.. Your poem will be one that many will relate too.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 1/10/2024 4:28:00 PM
Thank you for your insight on this one. I appreciate your comments and placement.
Date: 1/7/2024 11:54:00 PM
A very emotional write Lin, we think we get over loss but it's always there in the background gnawing away at our thoughts. Tom
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Date: 1/10/2024 4:27:00 PM
The emotional suffering never completely fades, Tom. Thank you very much.
Date: 1/7/2024 5:51:00 PM
The thread of grief runs through this poem as you are taken back to the night when 'wilding winds took your love, A heartfelt verse Lin
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:49:00 PM
Many thanks for your thoughts, Joseph.
Date: 1/7/2024 10:12:00 AM
Its hard to forget the pain of separation from loved one. Well penned.
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Date: 1/7/2024 3:05:00 PM
I appreciate you reading me today, Jay. Thanks for your kind remarks.
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