Wildfire

geese fall migration firetruck Waaaaaahhhhhhh echos dense smoke bellows

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/30/2022 1:48:00 AM

Loved the way this sounded like a real fire truck Eve.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/26/2022 8:12:00 PM

It destroys so much, nature, animals, people, life...etc. Great haiku, Eve. Hugs Charlie

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/25/2022 7:22:00 PM

I pity the birds in the sky and worry over the firemen and the homes they can’t save. The smoky air billowing makes it hard to breathe for man and all creatures. All this in just 3little lines Eve. Great job. Blessings xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/25/2022 11:03:00 AM

Hello Eve, forest fires that out of control are very dangerous. Takes longer to be put out. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/27/2022 12:05:00 PM

Hello Eve, Fires are frightening no matter where you live. oh-my-gosh! That is terrible! I am glad that you were okay. Where do people go for protection when that happens? Hugs my friend.

Eve Roper
Date: 1/25/2022 6:57:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. I leaved in Oregon for over 38 years, and they are frightening. I was only 2 hr drive from Mount Saint Helen when it blew.. ash over everything. Hugs my friend

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/25/2022 2:51:00 AM

They're terryfying to see Eve, have seen the destruction they cause. Tom

Eve Roper
Date: 1/25/2022 6:58:00 PM

Yes, they are destroying everything around them if not put out. Hugs my friend

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/25/2022 1:24:00 AM

No wonder the geese flew away, These wild fires destroy everything. Hugs.

Valsa George

Date: 1/24/2022 9:10:00 PM

A frightful scene is created in all its horror . Great Haiku !