Wildfire

geese fall migration 
firetruck Waaaaaahhhhhhh   echos
dense smoke bellows

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Caren Krutsinger

January 30, 2022 at 1:48 AM

Loved the way this sounded like a real fire truck Eve.

Charles Messina

January 26, 2022 at 8:12 PM

It destroys so much, nature, animals, people, life...etc. Great haiku, Eve. Hugs Charlie

Connie Marcum Wong

January 25, 2022 at 7:22 PM

I pity the birds in the sky and worry over the firemen and the homes they can’t save. The smoky air billowing makes it hard to breathe for man and all creatures. All this in just 3little lines Eve. Great job. Blessings xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 25, 2022 at 11:03 AM

Hello Eve, forest fires that out of control are very dangerous. Takes longer to be put out. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 27, 2022 at 12:05 PM

Hello Eve, Fires are frightening no matter where you live. oh-my-gosh! That is terrible! I am glad that you were okay. Where do people go for protection when that happens? Hugs my friend.

Eve Roper

January 25, 2022 at 6:57 PM

Thank you, Darlene. I leaved in Oregon for over 38 years, and they are frightening. I was only 2 hr drive from Mount Saint Helen when it blew.. ash over everything. Hugs my friend