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Wilderness, Lost

I hike as I've hiked a thousand times gone
          But curved like a serpent, the path that I'm on

The scrunching of steps in the snow as I walk
          Tick off precious seconds of time as they mock

The night swallows minutes, as they swallow me
          Hard payment, in lifeblood, for mortality ...

The magical mood of a white-spattered sky
          A dance, drifting soft, as the wink of an eye

Small heavenly jewels of a winter sky's weep
          And crystalline tears of the season's cold creep

Soft, tickling my face with memories, frozen
          The frosty reminders of fates that I've chosen ...

- Thus, leaving the plane wreck behind in a storm
          I set out in hopes of some refuge that's warm

And now, three days hence, air whispering death
          I'll trudge steady-on 'til my last icy breath ...

For should I end up in this cold, barren ground
          Ah, blessed will I end, with such beauty around ...

In the midst of a providence few ever know ...
          Enchantingly baptized ... by a heavenly snow!






~ 5th Place ~  in the "Action Adventure" Poetry Contest, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judge & Sponsor.
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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 3:31 PM
Expertly portrayed in perfect rhyme Greg! This beauty shines! Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo
Watt Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Greg, this one is magical! Being a SoCal guy, snow is a rare and very enchanting event, so I really feel the charm of this ode to snow. My fave was "Small heavenly jewels of a winter sky's weep / And crystalline tears of the season's cold creep", but I loved it all. Congrats!
Mishra Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 11:38 AM
This one is enchanting, thrilling and mesmerizing at the same time with soothing imagery. Congratulations on your win :)
Mcintosh Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 6:55 AM
Wow. Definitely a fave. It's beautiful, whimsical, enchanting and filled with words that adorn the poem, carefully portraying insights and inspirations most only dream of. I do so love it. Thank you for sharing this gem. Love to you, Gina
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