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Wild Woman Campfire With Amber Eyes

Wild woman campfire with amber eyes Dynamite gathering for happy seasoned crones Ethereal magic in a boxed setting with a joyful squeak. Dry crackling barn grass thrown on fire by winking slaves Whose witch cackles rise gloriously And Eyes are dancing and prancing In the lantern-like light of the campfire.

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/31/2019 10:21:00 PM

I do like this; brilliant imagery.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/1/2019 6:06:00 AM

A pretty easy write. I have campfires and bonfires all the time,and my witchy friends come and we cackle and snort.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 1/30/2019 7:35:00 PM

Enchanting poem.... still wish I could be there. ;)

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/31/2019 1:01:00 PM

Ooooh, do I even get to use the siren? *jumping up & down with excitement* ;D

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/30/2019 9:47:00 PM

I am bringing my red fire truck to you this summer, and picking you up for a week in the woods.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/30/2019 4:06:00 PM

imbued with dark mystery and charm, caren... an impressive write distinct it mood and content... really amazing..hugggs

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/30/2019 6:04:00 PM

I am so glad you liked it nette. I did also.

Bette Bavington

Date: 1/30/2019 12:40:00 PM

This is great with lots of imagery. Easy flowing. Easy read.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/30/2019 2:36:00 PM

Thank you Bette. It was written with a certain word list, and a limited word count, which forced me to do a bit better.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/29/2019 10:13:00 PM

great imagery. :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/29/2019 10:26:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I hope you are warm and safe. It is so BRRRR cold here, they have already called school off tomorrow. With the windchill we are expecting 20 degrees below zero! And 51 high on Saturday!