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Wild Weather

…birds in theirs nests men in smoked sheds its wildly wet in the west

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/4/2009 5:30:00 AM
Totally tropical ... and nostalgic for me ... may the nest be dry ... with all my love.
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Date: 5/27/2009 6:23:00 PM
I like the way this haiku opens up into space, starting with nests, then sheds, then the general direction of west. There is a nice sense of movement. And thanks for the "verse" suggestion.
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