Wild Weather

…birds in theirs nests
men in smoked sheds
its wildly wet in the west
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 5:30 AM
Totally tropical ... and nostalgic for me ... may the nest be dry ... with all my love.
Wilson Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 6:23 PM
I like the way this haiku opens up into space, starting with nests, then sheds, then the general direction of west. There is a nice sense of movement. And thanks for the "verse" suggestion.
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