Wild Symphony


Around me in a seamless stream, leaves cartwheel in the wind
They tumble from the tall ramparts, then seep into ravines
I've stepped into continuum, to a world beyond compare
to catch the day's reflection in still waters of a dream

Beneath me in a sheltered cove, where reeds and cattails sway
a flash of green, where frogs jump rope, with goals to break the calm 
Wind clearly shares a word or two, with ripples on the pond, 
and sweeps the grass upon the glass that traps the falling sun
 
I hone in on a water-bird, who doesn't seem aware
He dips his feet, and I can't speak,…..afraid he'll scurry far
The tranquil day is worry free, and peace is my best friend
Again, to tease, the jealous breeze has stirred the pond's veneer

Gold stretches out a wonderland, no moment's hesitation
as the low wide arms of marshland spreads, and calls for rapt attention 
I want to write a poem, a verse.....and curse my own distraction
My morning's gone, and afternoon finds splendor everywhere
The sky is bold, as day unfolds, beneath the fevered brow

Beholding beauty such as this, would cause the tongue to swell
Where the slopes of other places vie or longing eyes might dwell
The heart feels quiet sympathy, they cannot compare as well
O' mystery of what I see, I've learned, and I'm compelled 

If heaven shines so beautiful…I can't imagine how
If heaven shines so beautiful...Oh,  Lord,  please take me now


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8/14/16Inspired By the painting "Wild Symphony"
Contest: Wordscapes
Sponsored by John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/17/2016 11:55:00 PM
Beautiful imagery with wonderful choice of words. Amazing! Congrats on your win, Carrie.
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Date: 8/17/2016 1:36:00 AM
I hope the lord wont take you now dear, because you are needed here...But Im sure Heaven is as beautiful as this heaven you described to us on earth...Lovely imagery..Like a movie clip moving slowly through my mind.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/17/2016 1:37:00 AM
Somehkw reminds me of Alice in wonderland surrounded by the.beauty of nature..A fave
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