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Wild Skies

clouds submerge mountains waters reach blindly for shore stormy skies run wild
written: 10-16-2019 copyright 2019 Jeanne McGee

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Date: 10/16/2019 3:59:00 PM
They are rather wild like snorting steeds.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/17/2019 9:48:00 AM
oh my yes...I the rock came down from the mountainsides...
Date: 10/16/2019 12:00:00 PM
'waters reach blindly for shore' -- Wow. What a uniquely penned line, giving off multiple images in my mind's eye. Thank you, Jeanne. Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/17/2019 9:49:00 AM
the clouds came almost to touch the lake with such an abundance of hard rain
Date: 10/16/2019 10:50:00 AM
I'm looking at that sky now... wonderful ku
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/16/2019 11:00:00 AM
And I'm wishing it would go away...
Date: 10/16/2019 10:41:00 AM
love the image this haiku emits....beautifully penned :) hugs
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/16/2019 11:01:00 AM
thank you Sandra...I'm hoping to see a bit of a break in the grey soon...
Date: 10/16/2019 10:37:00 AM
Great picture you've penned here - love the imagery!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/16/2019 10:59:00 AM
And grey the color...

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