Wild Skies

clouds submerge mountains waters reach blindly for shore stormy skies run wild
written: 10-16-2019 copyright 2019 Jeanne McGee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 3:59 PM
They are rather wild like snorting steeds.
Mcgee Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 9:48 AM
oh my yes...I the rock came down from the mountainsides...
Wolf Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 12:00 PM
'waters reach blindly for shore' -- Wow. What a uniquely penned line, giving off multiple images in my mind's eye. Thank you, Jeanne. Warmest wishes, Gershon
Mcgee Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 9:49 AM
the clouds came almost to touch the lake with such an abundance of hard rain
Poetry Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 10:50 AM
I'm looking at that sky now... wonderful ku
Mcgee Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 11:00 AM
And I'm wishing it would go away...
Adams Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 10:41 AM
love the image this haiku emits....beautifully penned :) hugs
Mcgee Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 11:01 AM
thank you Sandra...I'm hoping to see a bit of a break in the grey soon...
There Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 10:37 AM
Great picture you've penned here - love the imagery!
Mcgee Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 10:59 AM
And grey the color...
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