Wild Roses

Wild, ecstatic, frivolous roses,
Haphazardly draping in staccato pink
The grassy embankment.
Bubbling, gleeful, like so many corsages
On fresh-faced girls at a
High school prom.
Cheerful, radiant, intricate charms,
Proffering subliminal messages
Of joy and hope rekindled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 11:26 AM
Cheerful and uplifting. I prefer this title to 'June' ~ it seems to bring the poem even more to life.
Zubair Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 2:58 AM
Just like human beings flowers represents many different expressions. A good light poetry
Mays Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 10:05 PM
Thank you.
Sietesantos Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 2:15 PM
Another delightful personification! These roses prance right into my heart!
Mays Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 7:54 PM
Thank you for letting me know. I appreciate your comments.
Fleming Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 2:13 AM
This is all rather quite charming, Carol! :) john.
Mays Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 8:52 PM
Thank you, John. Glad you enjoyed it. Carol
Deschler Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 5:09 PM
Roses can delight the senses in many ways, Carol, and your beautiful imagery really brought them to life in this lovely poem!
Mays Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 11:10 PM
Thanks! It's good to hear from you again. Carol
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