Laura Leiser Poet Rhyme

Wild Ride

Her mind is taking her
On a roller coaster ride
That goes against the tide
It crashes deep and wide.

She raises her emotions
Her voice fills up the air
She has a lost, blank stare
Her logic isn't there.

Incessant is her tongue
Insisting she is right
A down and dirty fight
She speaks with all her might.

Determined are her eyes
To get just what she wants
She yells out verbal taunts
The force can truly haunt.  

If only she would seek
And listen to the cries
Of wisdom from on High
Her soul won't crash and die.



2015

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Kim Rodrigues September 30, 2024 at 6:10 AM Yes, people can be like that, darkened in the own world, not seeing past their own thoughts, shooting off at the mouth, taking everyone out. Laura Leiser September 30, 2024 at 9:37 AM Thanks for commenting on this old write, Kim!

Paul Callus January 10, 2015 at 4:34 PM Some people believe that they are always right, even when they're not! Like your way of reasoning, Laura. a 7 for you. Have a lovely weekend. // paul Laura Leiser January 10, 2015 at 5:19 PM Thanks very much for your response, Paul. Yes, it's frustrating to deal with these people! Takes a lot of patience!

Pandita Sietesantos January 10, 2015 at 10:26 AM This is such a deep powerful inspirational piece! Excellent write that I enjoyed reading, Laura. Best wishes. Pandita Laura Leiser January 10, 2015 at 11:53 AM Thank you, Pandita, for your kind reply. I really appreciate it!

Emile Pinet January 9, 2015 at 12:37 PM A marvelous display of emotions. Very well done with wonderful feeling and depth. Emile Laura Leiser January 9, 2015 at 2:33 PM Thanks you, Emile! it has been hard to deal with a family member often is this way, but we love her anyway.

John Fleming January 8, 2015 at 1:02 AM A good little piece of prose, Laura. :) john. Laura Leiser January 8, 2015 at 2:11 PM Thank you, John. I've been away from the "soup" so I'll have to read your poems soon as well as others to catch up!