Premiere Contest WinnerWild Ride

Palindromes

One of our wildest, most memorable family sagas
involved my reckless brother, a racecar, a warm
spring day, and a non-adventurer, me. I warned, “Pop
said stay home today and mow.”  “Sometimes Pa’s a sap”!
he scoffed. “When I race, I always win top spot—safely,” 
he boasted. I wondered about the stats on car racing 
and wrecks? I strongly suspected kayak racing was safer, 
but I got in! He practically deified his souped-up coup 
with a near-prayer: "Race fast, safe car!" When we raced his 
rivals, my terror level was 12--on a scale of 10. 
Was it a cat I saw almost lose one of its nine lives 
as every tenet of sanity was abandoned?
Later, he bragged, “Now I won fair and square, Brother.
Name now one man who’s better. Stop shaking! You’re fine!”
I said, “Oh, I am? Refer to the huge wet spot on my seat!”



Date: September 21, 2018
Contest Title: Playing with Words under Fire
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

Date: April 23, 2020
entered in Wild Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Anthony Slausin
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Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 2:54 AM
Very nicely composed, Janice. Congratulations.
Canerdy Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Thanks so much, Subimal! Janice
Roper Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Janice, congratulations on your Palindromes win... Hugs Eve
Canerdy Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:20 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 11:21 AM
A fun read, Janice. Congrats on your top win.
Canerdy Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Thank you so much, Line! Janice
Allison Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 7:37 AM
What a humourous poem Janice:-) many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Thank you so much, Jan! Janice
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Hilarious! Oh you did that so well! So much fun :) Congratulations on your fine trophy win Janice! xomo
Canerdy Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 4:57 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen! Janice
Gentile Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 2:06 PM
Well done, Janice, congrats xxoo
Canerdy Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Thanks so much, Mike! Janice
Sands Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 1:04 PM
Excellent! Congratulations on your top win Janice :)
Canerdy Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 1:08 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi! Janice
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 11:33 AM
- Well done, Janice !!! - Congrats on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Canerdy Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! Janice
Gentry Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 11:32 AM
A great palindrome story! Congratulations on your #1 win. Enjoyed.
Canerdy Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Thank you so much, Susan! Janice
Wegman Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 10:28 AM
Really great read. Wonderful poem. CONGRATS and thanks for sharing!
Canerdy Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 1:10 PM
Thank you so much, Michael! Janice
May Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 9:09 AM
A wild adventurer as the heart races!...Congrats on your win Janice..
Canerdy Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 1:10 PM
Joseph, thank you so much for sponsoring the contest and for my win!!! Janice
Deo Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Memories may marinate, integrate us and frustrate us, but the poet inside us, will fly racecars, brooms, or bus. Thanks Janice- HAPPY MOTHERS DAY tomorrow. shalom, shalom. Anil
Canerdy Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Thank you so much for this wonderful comment, Anil! Janice
Pandit Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 5:57 AM
I remember reading a version of this fun story before. Who can forget that ending! Best for a win Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 8:09 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. I posted earlier but had a problem with the bolding. I ended up deleting and re-posting! Janice
Turner Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 11:49 PM
Very funny and also embarrassing, I'll bet. Aren't you smart? I would also bet you, yourself are a fast driver. Good luck and Happy Mother's Day ,Janice:)
Canerdy Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 8:13 AM
My foot is a bit heavy at times. I really had to work to get a palindrome in every line of this fictional piece! Thanks for your comments, Danny! Janice
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