Photograph by Ralph at Pixabay
Escaped to freedom in fragrant, rose petaled bliss, to feel sunshine's kiss! Through the gap, rose climbed away. Has my sweet rose gone to stay? Daring, creeping Rose in the pearl dripping moonlight; by dawn, out of sight. Glazed days and a better life await Rose, far from plum strife.
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