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Wife Not Well

Weary farmer, worn and worried, "The wife's not well", unspoken thoughts awash with grace- All he took for granted flows into his face His nurturer has left her place. 101 in a row (off the bad wagon) 191 Contest Judged: 12/20/2016 1:57:00 PM Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A 9th Place out of 10

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2016 3:34:00 PM

Suz, Congratulations on your awesome win, stop by and share a little smile on my blog, "FEED ME." ----"happy holidays" Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Len Gasun

Date: 12/1/2013 3:48:00 AM

My biggest hearty congratulations on your well-deserved win my dear friend Suz! Cheers and hugs! I love & so enjoyed this lovely write. Thank you so much for sharing as well! love lots and more hugs, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2013 9:40:00 PM

I really like this one of yours, Suz. Terse but the emotion is very well shown. congrats for your win.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/30/2013 6:31:00 PM

Am solemn reminder for spouses to appreciate each one another while they're still around. Nice use of alliteration, SuZ. Congrats!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/29/2013 4:59:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Suz_D

Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/23/2013 8:49:00 AM

You told the story of a marriage with its love and caring in a few lines. Very well done.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/20/2013 10:01:00 AM

sullenly quilled in a most beautiful way, suZ... love the rhythmic flow..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/19/2013 12:42:00 AM

- He must take good care of her ... hope she gets well - Nice poem SuZ ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)