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Wide Left

He always goes "wide left" when peeing after drinking Expects me to scrub the floor stench; what is he thinking? *Entry for Susan Burch's Couplet contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2011 10:14:00 AM

Good morning and congratulations on your win in Susan's "Couplet Challenge" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2011 10:59:00 PM

Awesome win. Congratulations, Carolyn.

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 9/29/2011 4:56:00 PM

Carolyn-Such a gem! Too funny! Congrats. to you

Daver Austin

Date: 9/27/2011 11:41:00 AM

Put a sign on the wall - "Stand close, the next person may be barefoot. LUck in the contest. Love, daver

Jack Horne

Date: 9/26/2011 12:09:00 PM

LOL, this is one for my dad - my mum's always shouting at him for this : )

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/25/2011 6:21:00 PM

sounds like he was lucky to even hit the bathroom! That's what the great outdoors is for! Good innovative take on this one Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/25/2011 4:26:00 PM

wow i get in to trouble for that also, awesome humour, good luck in contest, harry P.S soup mail

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2011 10:13:00 PM

EWWWW, who is this gross person? hahaha. GREAT couplet, Carolyn, How are you hanging in there today?

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/24/2011 9:37:00 PM

Crazy funny, Carolyn! Lol! The man needs his own Steam mop! lol This is really good. Love, Annalise

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 9/24/2011 8:35:00 PM

Bahahahhahahhaahha that's awsome

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/24/2011 8:34:00 PM

Tell him to sit down Caroly, a solution to every problem. It's funny but work too!

Nancy Jones

Date: 9/24/2011 5:45:00 PM

lololol... probably thinkin' you will which he'll probably keep thinking long after you stop.. funny one, Caroyn! Happy day~N

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/24/2011 3:33:00 PM

Too funny Carolyn!!Good luck..love,deb