Wide Blue Eyes

As she sits 'pon a Persian rug
Her pet lovingly by her side
This situation she can't shrug
As she sits 'pon a Persian rug
Frilly blue dress could've made her smug
But virtue shows in her blue eyes wide
As she sits 'pon a Persian rug
Her pet lovingly by her side

 http://www.art.com/products/p13207418-sa-i2322685/briton-riviere-sympathy.htm

Written this fourth of July 2013
Triolet Form One Stanza
ABaAabAB/upper case letters repeat lines/ lower case rhyme only
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horne Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 4:28 PM
lovely poem - will have to check out the pic, Sara
Duncan Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 11:17 PM
very nice Sara,,,, I check out the picture ;} thank you for reading my Autumn Birth. Happy fourth of July ;}
Anglesey Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 8:16 PM
Sara, painted in words as lovely as the art. I posted a poem inspired by a painting "Halo of Grace.... :)
Sivey Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 8:12 PM
This is another brilliant Triloet you have mastered Sara! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening my friend! What a magnificent piece, such a glorious poem, Great Work!!
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 5:27 PM
hey, you did triolet too. I have one in this form just posted! Great work, Sara.
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