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Wide Awake Ii

Insomnia isn't what this is...body feels the antithesis
   too many synapses tap dancing late
A recital of thoughts that wont disapate
  Body idle despite the cranium cartwheels--The heart feels ..
     much like a gerbil wheel spinning
              tireless night, patience is thinning
                   I
In the dark, there's no repression for forced out thought
Losing ten counts in bruising mind bouts 
   No preoccupation to mask this.... basque this in brighter shine
                        this is the jail-cell of night...
         With my past trangressions in sight,  I lay here reflecting
                  REM rejecting...as if everything's not alright

Lunar-revelation is my one-on-none time....
   Nights like these 
        make me spiteful 
              to morning birds that wake me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/8/2009 7:38:00 AM
Awesome write about insomnia. Man can I relate. Hope you get some rest. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/8/2009 3:11:00 AM
Man, I hope you find rest soon, there is not much worse than not being able to sleep. darn birds, chirping away like nothing is wrong! lol great poem, rest easy, Kristin
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