Wide Awake

Drip, drip, drip, drip, drip
The sounds of a sleepless night
Drip, snore, drip, snore, drip
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 12, 2010 at 11:36 AM
I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today Larry. I am so happy yours was amongest them. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with good health and delightful inspiration. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 10:06 AM
Sounds good! Nice write, Larry. LOL. Ralph
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July 11, 2010 at 9:29 AM
Lol,, awesome senryu,, I hate it when I'm awake and all left to do is here odd and aparent noises,, cool write..P.D.
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