Eve Roper Poet Couplet

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Wide Aimless Way

blue smile, bursting with sunshine, fervent zeal 
      jovial rhythm mood, fleeting in lull feel. 

   crisp briny ocean air, gulls beating wings 
      free over ripple heaven, white bird sings. 

   resonant resting snores as breath wind rolls,
      drags its waves, outstretch ripples mere controls. 

   playful mood white spume, covers tan sands face 
      a magical erosion taking place.  

   embedding each grain of sand as waves force 
      forward leaving size seashells in its course.

8/19/2021

Writing Prompt, Oceans Or Seas - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France August 27, 2021 at 6:13 AM Eve, beautiful, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Oceans and Seas, adore the image of course ~ love and serenity _Constance

William Kelii Kekaula August 26, 2021 at 12:26 AM Words that they are until your magic gave its beautiful purpose, Eve, to create that simple smile to oddly-looking faces in passing on a rainy day -- now that's magic my friend, so deservingly earned first placement with my compliments, Aloha!

Carol Mitra August 25, 2021 at 10:53 PM Beautiful poem Eve....Love it and I have got hold of your Nursery Rhyme book....I made my brother buy it in the U.S his kids loved the poems and stories....Thanks and much love :)

Sotto Poet August 25, 2021 at 5:48 PM Congratulations, Eve, you deserve it, with this incredible creation.

Regina Mcintosh August 25, 2021 at 4:06 PM Love it. Congrats on your top win. God bless you, Eve. Love, Gina

Malabika Ray Choudhury August 25, 2021 at 1:25 PM Congratulations, Eve, on your top win with this wonderful poem describing sea. To my faves, Dear Friend. Love ~ Mala

Victor Buhagiar August 20, 2021 at 1:41 AM Woderful way to describe the sea. I'm sure it will get a high rating. Hugs.

Gershon Wolf August 19, 2021 at 6:48 PM If you plan on entering a contest for the ugliest, coarsest, most fetid verse ever published, I wouldn't bother -- b/c this is the EXACT OPPOSITE, Eve. Just gorgeous!! Here's to a winner for you, and a FAVE for me. Thanks, gw Eve Roper August 19, 2021 at 9:03 PM thank you so very much for the encouraging and very inspiring compliment, my friend and the fav.