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blue smile, bursting with sunshine, fervent zeal jovial rhythm mood, fleeting in lull feel. crisp briny ocean air, gulls beating wings free over ripple heaven, white bird sings. resonant resting snores as breath wind rolls, drags its waves, outstretch ripples mere controls. playful mood white spume, covers tan sands face a magical erosion taking place. embedding each grain of sand as waves force forward leaving size seashells in its course. 8/19/2021 Writing Prompt, Oceans Or Seas - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 9/15/2021 12:44:00 PM

A beautiful poem, Eve. One of my favorite topics. Congrats for your contest win!

Constance La France

Date: 8/27/2021 6:13:00 AM

Eve, beautiful, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Oceans and Seas, adore the image of course ~ love and serenity _Constance

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/26/2021 12:26:00 AM

Words that they are until your magic gave its beautiful purpose, Eve, to create that simple smile to oddly-looking faces in passing on a rainy day -- now that's magic my friend, so deservingly earned first placement with my compliments, Aloha!

Carol Mitra

Date: 8/25/2021 10:53:00 PM

Beautiful poem Eve....Love it and I have got hold of your Nursery Rhyme book....I made my brother buy it in the U.S his kids loved the poems and stories....Thanks and much love :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/25/2021 5:48:00 PM

Congratulations, Eve, you deserve it, with this incredible creation.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/25/2021 4:06:00 PM

Love it. Congrats on your top win. God bless you, Eve. Love, Gina

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/25/2021 1:25:00 PM

Congratulations, Eve, on your top win with this wonderful poem describing sea. To my faves, Dear Friend. Love ~ Mala

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/20/2021 1:41:00 AM

Woderful way to describe the sea. I'm sure it will get a high rating. Hugs.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/19/2021 6:48:00 PM

If you plan on entering a contest for the ugliest, coarsest, most fetid verse ever published, I wouldn't bother -- b/c this is the EXACT OPPOSITE, Eve. Just gorgeous!! Here's to a winner for you, and a FAVE for me. Thanks, gw

Eve Roper
Date: 8/19/2021 9:03:00 PM

thank you so very much for the encouraging and very inspiring compliment, my friend and the fav.