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Wicked Deception

Face warmed by the sun I sit here patiently waiting for you. I gaze across the pond hoping that my search for love is few or stops with you. My eyes fixate towards the cloudless blue sky wondering if you will even come to meet me in our coveted place. You sauntered along a stony path Hurried pace with arms outstretched Reached for me as I clung to your chest. A promise you whispered in my ear as you caressed my thighs kissed my lips touching so gently my skin with your fingertips. We looked eye to eye as you painted a picture of sweet lies of our future and things to come. We held hands as I said goodnight And I dream of our new life well spun but You watched me leave as I said my adieus. You walked into the luminous moonlight strolled out of my life Into the arms of your very pregnant wife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/10/2013 1:17:00 PM
Congratulations!!! Christina --It was nice viewing your Featured Poem on the soups Home page :) this past week. Take Care and enjoy the NEW coming week.... *Luv~ > LINDA <
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Date: 10/26/2013 6:39:00 AM
Woe.....excellent twist in sad deception,,,,, really enjoyed reading this poem. Welcome to the soup:0) christina, pleasure reading your poems.....cherie
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Christina Holmes
Date: 10/26/2013 4:28:00 PM
Thank you so much for your feedback.
Date: 9/18/2013 1:42:00 PM
wow, Christina, amazing , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Christina Holmes
Date: 9/23/2013 12:10:00 AM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome friend!!! :)
Date: 9/18/2013 12:36:00 PM
Wow, what a "Wicked Deception" you painted here with this poem! Tough break at the end, but a nice poem here none the less! MC
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Christina Holmes
Date: 9/23/2013 12:12:00 AM
Thank you. :)
Date: 9/18/2013 12:59:00 AM
This is touching every woman's story....." once upon a time" # hmm heart felt
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Christina Holmes
Date: 9/23/2013 12:12:00 AM
Thank you:)
Date: 9/17/2013 12:06:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup, Christina ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Christina Holmes
Date: 9/23/2013 12:13:00 AM
Thank you:)
Date: 9/17/2013 2:37:00 AM
Christina, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Christina Holmes
Date: 9/23/2013 12:13:00 AM
Thank you:)

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