Wicked Cahoots

When he made
his first personal appearance
in the dirty alley
on someone else's rusty bike,
screaming along
in a cloud of dust
it rendered us all
speechless and motionless.
But I was amazed
that despite his grey-faced surliness,
he was very affable with us...
the bully with a naive 
and sentimental heart.
He was so happy
to hear that I liked his dad
or that my mum liked him
and he was welcome
to come to tea
with us at five twenty five...
Our "adventures" were spectacular:
chasing after other bikesters,
screaming at the top 
of our lungs
into blocks of flats
and then running
as our echoed waves of terror
blended with incoherent threats...
"I'll call the Police, I'll..."
Wicked cahoots.

("Wicked Cahoots" and "The Woodville Hall Soul Boys" stem from stories written in the late 1970s; while they first saw the light of day in versified form in 2006.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 1/12/2015 8:17:00 AM
Ahh . . . The insanity of youth. Doing outrageous things just because we could. I recall those years although my youth was tempered very badly by my mothers . . . how shall I say . . . insanity. Even so I had my wild moments, I just paid for them more severely than did the other kids. Loved this . . .
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Carl Halling
Date: 1/13/2015 7:51:00 AM
I'm so pleased you like this so much, Patrick, thanks for such an encouraging comment.
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