Wicked

Breathing, balmy whispers flow across our cheeks
Coaxing, wayward senses spiral deep
Savored, magic's enchanted powers thrill
Toward infinite surrender, as chaotic hearts
Engulf our tryst of taboo dreams

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Robin Davis

December 30, 2013 at 8:18 AM

Karen These words pull the reader into a write of sensuality, mischief, enjoyment, pleasure, steaminess, delight, sexy, and excitement. An erotic world of dreams and badness. Thanks for the congrats and nice comment on my Crazily Contagious poem.

Karen Anglesey

December 30, 2013 at 10:46 AM

Thank you for the detailed and encouraging review. Have a Happy New Year :)

Rockman Pritts

October 18, 2013 at 12:35 AM

I like it. It smelled of sensuality and desire. Too bad you didn't take it further. It could have been a very seductive write. I don't like to pander my poetry in my reviews but I'll make an exception on this one. At first read I wanted to recommend "Dark Enchantress", but after re-reading I'm leaning more toward "Sweet Love". On another note, I think "Taboo Dreams" would have been a better title. A good title is what makes me choose a poem to read from the hundreds that are offered. Rockman :-)

Karen Anglesey

October 18, 2013 at 12:47 AM

Thank you for offering such an insightful perspective. I did change the title after I posted it on this sight and I'm not sure why I chose "Wicked", probably because the magic, enchantment and tryst seem to suggest a hint of wicked. I like to leave something for the reader to imagine.

Karl Marszalowicz

July 31, 2013 at 6:36 PM

go on with this poem, taboo dreams are the seductive necessity of a new passion's birth.

Karen Anglesey

July 31, 2013 at 7:22 PM

Well said...thank you :)

Stephen Kilmer

July 27, 2013 at 6:44 PM

Toxic love. Sometimes being wicked is fun. We are human and must reach for all the emotions to understand the ones that matter. I love this one. Kilmer

Karen Anglesey

July 27, 2013 at 9:00 PM

Thank you for the generous comments. I enjoy wicked playfulness especially when it involves love.

Shadow Hamilton

June 23, 2013 at 8:44 PM

this is super love it Shadow x smiles

Karen Anglesey

July 27, 2013 at 8:58 PM

Hi Shadow, thank you very much :)

Debbie Guzzi

June 22, 2013 at 3:36 PM

I love all your titles they are so alluring. Above I bet you could make a fine sonnet out of that content! Thanks so much for stopping by my verses and commenting. Light & Love

Karen Anglesey

June 22, 2013 at 5:15 PM

Debbie, thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments :)

Poet Destroyer A

June 16, 2013 at 8:47 PM

woe! nice and wicked. amazing how you spill the rush... enjoyed~ Linda

Karen Anglesey

June 17, 2013 at 3:48 PM

Linda, appreciate your comments such as"spill the rush" nice interpretation. :)

Debbie Duncan

April 30, 2013 at 10:43 AM

Oh I love this one all the way thru ;} I've written a few like this, By The Sea, & a few others. Thank you for reading Lost Boys ;} have a great day.

Karen Anglesey

April 30, 2013 at 12:18 PM

Debbie, I am very inspired by your fabulous writing. Thank you for your generous comments

Michael Ainsley

April 29, 2013 at 3:25 PM

Indeed I love the title and the poem. Thanks it was fun. Michael

Karen Anglesey

April 29, 2013 at 3:31 PM

Michael, thank you for reding. I appreciate your review cheers!

Debra Squyres

April 24, 2013 at 1:24 PM

Now this may be a wicked taboo...but it is so wonderfully expressive.

Karen Anglesey

April 25, 2013 at 5:53 PM

Thankyou Debra

Black Eyed Susan

April 22, 2013 at 2:15 PM

that does sound wickedly delicious! an apt title :)

Karen Anglesey

April 22, 2013 at 7:08 PM

I hope not too wicked. I should change the title to Wickedly Delicious. I like it! :)

Andrea Dietrich

April 12, 2013 at 7:02 PM

very beautiful poetry!

Karen Anglesey

April 20, 2013 at 5:13 PM

Thank you Andrea, I appreciate the beautiful review

Harry Horsman

April 11, 2013 at 10:22 AM

another harry agrees with harry below,, this is wonderful poetry,, just would love to see this extended to a sonnet...

Karen Anglesey

April 20, 2013 at 5:15 PM

Harry, As you have suggested, I have been thinking about stretching this into a sonnet. Hopefully my blender brain can work on that. I love a good challenge. Thank you !

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

April 4, 2013 at 8:50 PM

Dear Karen, Absolutely Amazing YOU are an Exceptional POETESS.I Bow to YOUR Laureatus Talent. A Crown of Laural upon YOUR head and "The Golden Pen of Excellency" Awarded to YOU ( This is an Imaginary Trophy Lenore and I made up for each other when the POETRY surpassed the Human Realm. I am so glad YOU came to POETRYSOUP.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Servant,Liege...Harry

Karen Anglesey

April 20, 2013 at 5:18 PM

Harry, thank you for the "Golden Pen of Excellency" Award. I am simply elated that you have bestowed such magnificent praise. I hope to be truly deserving some day. Your benevolent friend, Karen

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