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Why You Have To Go Brandon

Why you have to go I don't want you to go I understand why you have to go When it's all over will you come bac to me I love you so much and I hope you love me too We can be as one and we can be good together I want to give my heart to you if u let me My heart is all for you if you want it I ride or die for you and I think you can see that I love when I'm around you You ligth up my day and you are my star at nigth I need a man like you in my life Your the one I dream about at nigth That's how much I love you and not going to stop loveing you I feel so happy when I'm with you I want to take you away from all the bad thing you seen Give it all to me Brandon and don't run from me baby This is for the man I love Brandon

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Danielle White

Date: 4/28/2009 8:18:00 AM

Your reply makes no sense. I literally cannot understand what you are saying. Is English your first language? Be sure to have lots of equally uneducated, profane, and ignorant children. You'll make the world a so much better a place. (Oops,is sarcasm over your head, too?)

Danielle White

Date: 4/28/2009 12:59:00 AM

Your use of profanity and your misspelling of "your" as "UR" further proves my point. The 'street vernacular' has its place in our culture, but I worry that you lack knowledge of proper grammar and spelling and that this will hold you back in the adult world. Learn to sound and write intelligently in order to have a better future. No offense meant. I would be happy to tutor you. ****Danielle****

Danielle White

Date: 4/22/2009 8:38:00 PM

A perfect example of the shameful inadequacies of the public school systems in this country.

Vanessa Brown

Date: 4/22/2009 10:59:00 AM

that is hot you really luv him