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Why We Must Go On

propriocetion of an unhappy deltoid the eyeball flambé of envy and other itches stitches palsies and gouts shout give up, throw it in, it’s too much! such suggestions never make me waver rather raise a stubborness in my endeavour ring a bell far out in my stormy sea inchcape finisterre inistrahull light oh no stubborness is the star stops me bailing out keeps me bailing in the teeth of howl gales bark though land and home and sky are out of sight and my unwilling bark fills fast in time’s approaching night and all is mist and sea’s unstable carp.

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Date: 10/16/2024 10:52:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/18/2016 12:53:00 PM
JOHN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:55:00 PM
JOHN, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 4/13/2011 4:47:00 PM
dark and fabulous, john.. CHEERS for the fine win..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/13/2011 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations for your win John in the contest "Why We Must Go On" sponsored by Matt Caliri. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2011 8:57:00 PM
Congrats John on your big win in Matt's contest with this great entry luv.. enjoy..
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Date: 4/12/2011 10:04:00 AM
I loved the other-wordly wording in this piece...congrats on 6th place finish in my contest!
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Date: 4/8/2011 4:48:00 PM
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Date: 4/1/2011 6:08:00 PM
Welcome to the soup, keep up the excellent writing~~
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Date: 4/1/2011 1:11:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup. enjoyed reading this, very creative.
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Date: 4/1/2011 8:32:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your awesome contest entry of same name..good luck and hope all your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. happy weekend ...
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Date: 4/1/2011 4:47:00 AM
Creative and thoughtful verses, john
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