Mystic Rose Rose Poet Narrative

Why We Fell In Love

As I shed myself for you 
                     piece by piece 
May I never lose sight 
            of who I am 
                           and 
            what I am all about....

As I join my heart 
                  to yours 
May I be your loving addition 
             and not your only 
      what I need most is me....

As love takes us to 
                      the Everest mountain 
May I never have to jump 
         without you 
we are in this together....

As we rise above,   
                   whether we shine together 
or stay in the shadows alone ... 
May we never lose sight 
             of how and why, we fell in love  !

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Yann Rolland August 11, 2025 at 2:49 AM love is abandon, i can feel that in this delicate and touching poetry, enjoyed a lot

Victor Buhagiar August 10, 2025 at 4:58 AM What a delightful love poem. As they say, it takes two to tango. Perfect in love. Mystic Rose Rose August 10, 2025 at 3:24 PM It surely does Victor, thats the best kind of dance,

Paula Goldsmith August 8, 2025 at 1:15 PM I enjoyed reading your lovely "Why We Fell In Love" write with a great picture. Great Ending... FAV for me... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away............. Mystic Rose Rose August 8, 2025 at 6:29 PM Glad you enjoyed the poem Paula, hope your keeping well, thinking of you :)

Jay Narain August 8, 2025 at 10:12 AM Beautiful love poem. The poem reflects the true love. Mystic Rose Rose August 8, 2025 at 6:29 PM Yes indeed true love but not at the expense of our own soul.

Joseph P. DiMino August 8, 2025 at 8:47 AM Beautiful! Deep and poignant. Great poetry! Romantic poetry is not about wisdom, truth nor lies -- it is about being fiery alive! Every word breathing, exploding with passion. You get a FAV! Mystic Rose Rose August 8, 2025 at 6:29 PM True love always feels like breathing under water, lol, thanks for the comment Joe

Unseeking Seeker August 8, 2025 at 6:48 AM Ah but where love is, there is no thought, only the effervescence of bliss … yet I do agree with your sentiments of retaining individuality, entwined with a spirit of sacrifice and mutual respect. Mystic Rose Rose August 8, 2025 at 6:30 PM Entwined but not abandoning the self, that is the best kind of love