Why Wait?

First warm, gentle rain With the sun, life, renewal Spring, a new outlook Entry for Carol Brown's Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/17/2012 3:19:00 PM

Hello Shawn, yes, why wait for the beauty and outlook... a nice little win here. Thank you for the kind comment on my latest poem..always~LINDA

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/25/2012 11:14:00 PM

Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I can't wait for the spring either.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/24/2012 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week Shawn. Love, Carol

Joshua Lacey

Date: 11/9/2010 1:20:00 PM

praise the Lord for the time of renewal! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2010 5:16:00 PM

congrats, Shawn!! NIce message.

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/31/2010 11:32:00 AM

Short and beautiful poetry you have here. Thank for sharing it with us. Enjoy your sunday. :)

Kim Hilliker

Date: 1/30/2010 11:40:00 PM

Great waiting for Spring poem. Good luck in the contest.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2010 10:23:00 PM

I like the way you convey spring's welcome "renewal," Shawn. Indeed, why wait? Come to Florida and bask in the sun year round. Love, Carolyn