Why Wait?

First warm, gentle rain
With the sun, life, renewal
Spring, a new outlook

Entry for Carol Brown's Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 17, 2012 at 3:19 PM
Hello Shawn, yes, why wait for the beauty and outlook... a nice little win here. Thank you for the kind comment on my latest poem..always~LINDA
Pettit Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 11:14 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I can't wait for the spring either.
Brown Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 12:02 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Shawn. Love, Carol
Lacey Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 1:20 PM
praise the Lord for the time of renewal! :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 5:16 PM
congrats, Shawn!! NIce message.
Burton Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 11:32 AM
Short and beautiful poetry you have here. Thank for sharing it with us. Enjoy your sunday. :)
Hilliker Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 11:40 PM
Great waiting for Spring poem. Good luck in the contest.
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January 30, 2010 at 10:23 PM
I like the way you convey spring's welcome "renewal," Shawn. Indeed, why wait? Come to Florida and bask in the sun year round. Love, Carolyn
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