Why Then Spring?

Why Then Spring?           

Winter’s worn welcome
God’s rebirth promise anew
Makes spring yearning real.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 3, 2010 at 7:56 AM
What an inspirational view on spring--my favorite season. Nice use of alliteration in the opening line. Blessings to you for sharing this uplifting message with us. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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February 1, 2010 at 3:47 PM
Great haiku and I hope you entered this in Carol's contest as its a winner for sure!! Welcome to PoetrySoup, Jeralynn ... hope to get around to reading more of your excellent writing.
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January 28, 2010 at 4:13 PM
Great tie in with God's promise, faith yearning making spring happen. Like also the alliteration reality of the words. Winter's worn welcome. Another beauty par toi meme ! Should do well. Good luck and i do like this one too. Robert Thanks for all, Jeralynn. Robert
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January 27, 2010 at 8:15 AM
Best wishes with this one Jeralyn.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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January 26, 2010 at 8:38 PM
Yes, I agree with Marty. that last line is awesome! thanks for your comment. LUv, andrea
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January 26, 2010 at 11:47 AM
I love your last line...Enjoyed...Good luck in the contest...Marty
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January 26, 2010 at 10:17 AM
Good Haiku that expresses your Faith. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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January 25, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Heavenly Haiku Jeralynn, good luck in Carol's contest, this may well be on the winners podium >> thank you so much for your kind comments >> James
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January 25, 2010 at 3:02 PM
Ya Yanks shore do git yer fill of winter right quickly. LOL Here in the South, we envy those cool temperatures and wish winter would last longer. I thought about that today while walking on the beach and splashing on some suntan lotion. Ok, so I'm attempting a bit of wit, but I really like your haiku, Jeralynn! Love, carolyn (born and raised in cold New Jersey)
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January 25, 2010 at 1:43 PM
new poem posted
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