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Why Then Spring?

Why Then Spring? Winter’s worn welcome God’s rebirth promise anew Makes spring yearning real.

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Date: 2/3/2010 7:56:00 AM

What an inspirational view on spring--my favorite season. Nice use of alliteration in the opening line. Blessings to you for sharing this uplifting message with us. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen

Sue Mason

Date: 2/1/2010 3:47:00 PM

Great haiku and I hope you entered this in Carol's contest as its a winner for sure!! Welcome to PoetrySoup, Jeralynn ... hope to get around to reading more of your excellent writing.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/28/2010 4:13:00 PM

Great tie in with God's promise, faith yearning making spring happen. Like also the alliteration reality of the words. Winter's worn welcome. Another beauty par toi meme ! Should do well. Good luck and i do like this one too. Robert Thanks for all, Jeralynn. Robert

Brian Strand

Date: 1/27/2010 8:15:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Jeralyn.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2010 8:38:00 PM

Yes, I agree with Marty. that last line is awesome! thanks for your comment. LUv, andrea

Marty Owens

Date: 1/26/2010 11:47:00 AM

I love your last line...Enjoyed...Good luck in the contest...Marty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2010 10:17:00 AM

Good Haiku that expresses your Faith. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

James Fraser

Date: 1/25/2010 3:33:00 PM

Heavenly Haiku Jeralynn, good luck in Carol's contest, this may well be on the winners podium >> thank you so much for your kind comments >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/25/2010 3:02:00 PM

Ya Yanks shore do git yer fill of winter right quickly. LOL Here in the South, we envy those cool temperatures and wish winter would last longer. I thought about that today while walking on the beach and splashing on some suntan lotion. Ok, so I'm attempting a bit of wit, but I really like your haiku, Jeralynn! Love, carolyn (born and raised in cold New Jersey)

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/25/2010 1:43:00 PM

new poem posted