Why Should I Be Them

I'm not another statistic
I'm someone who is optimistic
But, still realistic
And literarily artistic

Don't wanna be another statistic
Another stupid black youth
On trial being sworn in to telling the truth
Another quote, unquote "black"
On the corner selling weed, crack, smack

You see them fools?
Thinking they're a star 'cause they make the evening news
They want me to be anotha 
'Cause if I don't I'm not considered a " brother"
They want me to be another
To either buy the drug, make it, or sell 
A poison, that should  send them all to hell

But that won't be me
Droppin out of school to later study for a GED
But that will be me later 
Graduating highschool, then college, and getting my degree

I don't understand why they want me to be them 
Nothing good ever comes to them
Except for the easy tax free bread
But in the end they all end up, shot up, locked up, or dead

So why should that be me?
Do you know me?
Because if you did, you'd know that will never be me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/1/2010 6:40:00 AM
Gripping words, very nice. Never let anyone tell you who you are or should be. And good job on breaking the mold, it is a very hard thing to do, trust me I did it too. Keep you head up, ~Chris
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Date: 11/1/2010 5:55:00 AM
Very raging and powerful thoughts with nice rhyming on Why should I be them, Freddy
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