Anu Nayak Poet Rhyme

Why My Feelings Faded For You

WHY MY FEELINGS FADED FOR YOU...


Said You, Ours is an unconditional love
When time took its test, you flew away my dove

Said you, If I ask for moon, you’ll place it at my feet
When I needed you the most, you deserted me only to cheat

To sustain our relation,whenever you had to say or do
You hurt my heart each time, I overcame, I even forgot ,I let go

But now,smoldering this painful bruise on soul, has let me feel stark low
Little feelings left has flown away, no chance to amend even if you bow

Had you stayed beside while I wept, with your gestures and warmth genuine 
I would feel truly blessed to nurture our love till my end in my heart’s shrine! 





Written on:16th Oct 2016
For contest by Silent One

P.S: this poem is in response to the quote  “I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.” ? Maya Angelou

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Balveen Cheema October 27, 2016 at 5:00 AM Congrats Anu! If only we made amends for our wrong. Balveen

Teddy Kimathi October 26, 2016 at 11:14 AM Congrats Anulaxmi, for your WIN with this fine piece!! ;-) Anu Nayak October 26, 2016 at 1:46 PM Dear Teddy, thank you so much, glad you liked my poem//love,Anu:)

Manoj Kumar October 19, 2016 at 5:22 AM Yes, we remember how someone made us feel. And yes, just that added effort of taking a relation to the full distance would save so many of us from sadness :) Anu Nayak October 19, 2016 at 6:38 AM Dear Manoj, Your visit is so pleasant! I agree...relation whatever may be sustains when there is mutual respect and ego absolution from both the sides... thank you// love and hugs, Anu:)

Beejadhur Sewumber October 16, 2016 at 3:06 PM Wonderful. It applies to many. True what you've written in well chosen words. I like it. Congrats. Anu Nayak October 18, 2016 at 9:58 AM Dear Beejadhur, I appreciate your visit and words, glad you liked my poem, yeah....it applies to many....thank you very much //love, Anu:)