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WHY MY FEELINGS FADED FOR YOU

WHY MY FEELINGS FADED FOR YOU... Said You, Ours is an unconditional love When time took its test, you flew away my dove Said you, If I ask for moon, you’ll place it at my feet When I needed you the most, you deserted me only to cheat To sustain our relation,whenever you had to say or do You hurt my heart each time, I overcame, I even forgot ,I let go But now,smoldering this painful bruise on soul, has let me feel stark low Little feelings left has flown away, no chance to amend even if you bow Had you stayed beside while I wept, with your gestures and warmth genuine I would feel truly blessed to nurture our love till my end in my heart’s shrine! Written on:16th Oct 2016 For contest by Silent One P.S: this poem is in response to the quote “I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.” ? Maya Angelou

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Date: 10/27/2016 5:00:00 AM
Congrats Anu! If only we made amends for our wrong. Balveen
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Date: 10/26/2016 11:14:00 AM
Congrats Anulaxmi, for your WIN with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 10/26/2016 1:46:00 PM
Dear Teddy, thank you so much, glad you liked my poem//love,Anu:)
Date: 10/19/2016 5:22:00 AM
Yes, we remember how someone made us feel. And yes, just that added effort of taking a relation to the full distance would save so many of us from sadness :)
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 10/19/2016 6:38:00 AM
Dear Manoj, Your visit is so pleasant! I agree...relation whatever may be sustains when there is mutual respect and ego absolution from both the sides... thank you// love and hugs, Anu:)
Date: 10/16/2016 3:06:00 PM
Wonderful. It applies to many. True what you've written in well chosen words. I like it. Congrats.
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 10/18/2016 9:58:00 AM
Dear Beejadhur, I appreciate your visit and words, glad you liked my poem, yeah....it applies to many....thank you very much //love, Anu:)