Why Me

Why, oh why can't I get it right? I ask myself this question every day
and every night.

    Some of us are different from the rest. Some of us have a fear of
success.

    In our minds, we believe we try. But in reality, we're living a lie.
   
    Someone once told me, trying is lying. You do it or you don't. I really
want to live life as i'm suppose to, but I fear that I won't.

    I've had many problems from the start. It seems to me when I get my
**** together, my ******* falls apart.

    I could fake it as I've done before. But as soon as I get through with
one problem, another opens the door.

    Please help me Lord and show me what to do. I need you in my life,
Lord. I surrender to you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/6/2015 11:43:00 PM
I love this, I feel the emotion. You will get through this, many are facing this, God has got you.
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Date: 3/7/2015 2:16:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. A lot of my poems are about what I was going through at the time and some were written for friends or relatives. Some are based on society itself like, "Guns". I have a few more I am going to submit also. I hope you enjoy them as well.
Date: 3/6/2015 11:42:00 PM
I love this, I feel the emotion. You will get through this, many are facing this, God has got you.
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