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why leave

why do you leave me blushing sun hides behind clouds moons coolness subsides

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Date: 12/4/2023 4:25:00 AM
Very evocatively expressed, when our loved ones leave, the sun hides behind those gloomy clouds and one can feel the chills of their absence.. Beautifully woven..
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Karen Croft
Date: 12/4/2023 9:44:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/4/2023 12:33:00 AM
This is lovely. Well done.
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Karen Croft
Date: 12/4/2023 12:50:00 AM
Thank you!

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