Why Is the Sky Blushing

The blushing sky

under evenings spell,

saw sun kissing sea

and did not tell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/10/2014 9:04:00 AM
Clever and cute. Liked it mucho. Love, daver
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 10/10/2014 6:36:00 PM
Thanks, daver, Who among us are not inspired by sunrises and sunsets! My best to you, Darlene
Date: 10/10/2014 6:38:00 AM
Love this, Darlene.
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 10/10/2014 7:49:00 AM
What inspiration in nature God give us to enjoy! Every day, something new.
Date: 10/8/2014 2:57:00 PM
From the very little I know of you my dear Darlene, these is exactly the sweet loving words I would expect from your pen! Loving hugs, Jack XXX
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 10/8/2014 4:09:00 PM
Hello, Jack, I don't know how many of my poems you have read, but to say you think you know my style already is a blessing. Thank you! Hope you have a great rest of your day. And I do appreciate your liking my work. Darlene
Date: 10/7/2014 8:34:00 PM
Thanks, Connie, it is rewarding to hear that you could envision what I saw that evening standing by the sea. Some poems just come to you so unexpected like this one. Good thing I had my pad and pen with me, to capture the image. Thanks for fav'ing it and for the #7.
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Date: 10/7/2014 5:49:00 PM
This made me smile and gave me joy to envision the imagery your poem painted Darlene. Short and sweet, just like I like them! I am fav'ing this one!#7
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Date: 10/7/2014 1:58:00 PM
simply divine its a 7 from me! hugs Jan xxx
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 10/7/2014 2:50:00 PM
A sunset by the sea gave me this poem, Jan. I'm glad you like it. Blessings, Darlene
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